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Dealthagar · Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 2:13 pm Post subject: The Unraveling - Critique

So I was doing some reading on theoretical geometry and fractal mathematics (as I do from time to time) and i came across some fractal thread equations, and realized that was how Dealth's "Eyes of the Void" saw the universe. The concept stuck in my head, along with some of the RP thats been going on in/around Umbra.

The concept of adding the visual to the story was something I did on a whim.

The Unraveling

Comments? Critiques? Were the visuals too much/unneeded?
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Kal'iksix · Guest

looks like at bad acid trip.....lol no no, I kid. I like them, kinda gave me the idea of what he was feeling, sort of how some people can see others auras.

Ceinwyn ab'Arawn · Transcendent Spammer Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Posts: 5017

I really enjoyed seeing what he saw. Each picture you put with what was going on in his mood/thought. They really complimented and fit the mood of the story well. As it progressed, they did also, shifting to match what he sensed.

Xana · Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:04 pm Post subject:

I myself am an absolute fiend for anything fractal. I've lost count how many programs I've used to render flames and variations of Apo I've downloaded.

With this said, I loved the post.
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Sara Delan · Sage Joined: 08 Jan 2008 Posts: 579

I didn't like them only because the pictures were too big for my amazingly poor internet! Evil or Very Mad

I only saw one, but that was pretty super cool. Didn't read the story or anything, though.
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Isk · Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:05 am Post subject:

Any post with a picture in it is double in awesome. I liked the designs because they went with the story and were visually pleasing. Never seen that sort in a post before so double points for uniqueness.

Drayek · Certifiable Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 1690

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I never really cared about fate anyways.

Drayek · Certifiable Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 1690

Ok, IC post that relates to this is posted.