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Another song from the roleplaying rapper! "Khenemutankh
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Wolfe
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 8:08 pm Post subject: Another song from the roleplaying rapper! "Khenemutankh Reply with quote
Hey guys. This is kind of an experimental type of song. Beat's from Mister Ka on soundclick (www.misterkabeats.com), I'm the rapper/mixer for the vocals and the singer on the hook is my girlfriend. Let me know what you think?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=415959&content=songinfo&songID=6159663

Thanks!
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:37 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
I thought it was good! I liked it more than the last one by a bit. The lyrics seemed smoother flowing.

I think some of the effects on the vocals kind of seemed overdone at times, though. It was ok, but they occasionally seemed a little smothered.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:10 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
My suggestion would be to back off the female voices just a little. They seem to over-power the theme.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:01 am Post subject: Reply with quote
The mixing is poor on that version, I apologize. I've tweaked it via feedback from the production forum I visit, just haven't uploaded the new version.

Thanks for listening, guys Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:50 am Post subject: Reply with quote
From an old man's perspective.... Cool I actually like it...well done
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:10 am Post subject: Reply with quote
I listened to it...I thought it was very nice. Morus likes it too Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 11:24 am Post subject: Reply with quote
From someone who only listens to Emo boy music... Good work. I enjoyed it. I actually liked some of the older stuff you've posted better but this was very well done also, and very smooth. Beautiful vocals and mixing and a nice tone. Very nice.
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