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Davaran Skyfire
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:22 am Post subject: A poem. Reply with quote
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Within the real of tangible beings,
Something spectral lurks and lingers,
Be it not outside my seeings,
but worlds away from anxious fingers.

A vision, angel, perhaps a wraith,
Or some distant pleasant face?
To look upon the be not safe,
so distant now must be my place.

Anon thy lips, so aught to frown
findest solice, comfort, peace?
Aloft our bodies, by leaves now brown,
but for now, mine thoughts thine lease.

A specter lives within my heart,
treading lightly apon my pain,
my heart rapping gently whilst we're apart.
Waiting until you and I are we again.

A silent vigil, rapping anon my soul,
a hierophant my phantasmal deacon
silently,daily, she plays her role.
My love, my dear, my beacon
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Ceinwyn ab'Arawn
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:24 am Post subject: Reply with quote
I love this. Did you write it?
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Davaran Skyfire
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:40 am Post subject: Reply with quote
Aye I did. The fall of last year. I finally though it was post worthy....or I just found my flash drive again. Deffinatly one of the two.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:02 am Post subject: Reply with quote
Very beautiful suh. Nice work.
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Ceinwyn ab'Arawn
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:12 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Could a mod please move this to art section so it doesn't get wiped out of existence?
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Darrien Church
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:17 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Done
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Rryn Anyai
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:42 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
so glad you moved it here so I wouldnt miss it.

Beautifully written Davaran. You have great talent with words Smile

You need to share the rest of your work with us soon!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:45 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
*hides under some random object*
It was a lot of confusing feeling bubbling to the surface. It was suppose to be about Hester and Dimmsdale's separation in the scarlet letter, but I found some better inspiration. I'm mulling over getting it published.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
While I hate the Scarlet Letter, personally.. I love this poem and I warn you I will probably save a copy to my hard drive. It is really well written and I particularly like the rhyme scheme you use and the flow of the words. The meaning comes across superbly, and is very reminiscent of older poetry.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:42 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Show me a problem that can't be solved with ABAB rhyme scheme!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:55 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Davaran Skyfire wrote:
Show me a problem that can't be solved with ABAB rhyme scheme!


Open, non-lyrical.
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